How eclectic can you be? When experimenting you resist…
How receptive can you be? When the fog hits the mist…
I jumped up with joy; I got what I wanted…
Fate’s unusual ploy, my destiny taunted…
I wanted to escape, without the usual route…
With too much at stake, I jumped the loop…
The void inside me cursed, I couldn’t contain…
All was what I rehearsed, but joy couldn’t sustain…
The farther I went, the longer it seemed to take…
My father was bent, and I was pulling him to break…
My conscience battled hard, and my spirits it did lift…
A son finally did his part; His father – a precious gift!
Note: You can watch the youtube video of it HERE – Sai lives in TN, USA currently, is a screenplay writer in Indian Film Industry and a tech guru (working for HMV). He has also been a very dear friend, fellow comrade during my college years and quite recently, a young dad!
and ohh… by the way… Sai ROCKS! \m/
@ Sai…. No Problemo man! you're just a modest guy who just likes being more than generous with your friends 🙂 All the very best for your future projects man! I'm sure you have places to go!
See you shortly man!
poem is well composed… couldn't see the video though….
^^ Thanks for the comment on the poem, the video is available at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7tdsqMqEaHs Do watch else, you'll only see the glass half empty 🙂
hey nice poem buddy
well written like it
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@ Himanshu… Thanks mate
Impressive – Go places Sai. Make us proud.
Yan — you lil' **** 🙂
..says a proud friend
@ Mahe… Thanks mate…